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this is how I imagine your ears
strange like blueberries and bellybuttons.
I know you're a surge protector
and a biodegradable watch
but this
is how I imagine your eyes
crescent coffee stains
or an endless morning.
always pointing East
you swear your blood runs
like a river
and this
is how I imagine your chest
present tense proverbial
and weightlessness in a jar.


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Waltz-With-Me's avatar
This is so wonderful. :heart: I love it. It might be the commercial jingle I'm listening to while reading, but it has such quirky depth.

My only criticism would be the "blood flows like a river." It pales in comparison, unless there's a particular reason you used that cliche wording - in which case, I'd love an explanation in the work itself. :aww:

Great work.